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:heart: Star candy in a hello kitty bento box :heart:

I also one day hope for this to maybe be a Daily Deviation "DD"

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A great capture, I love the selections of colours that you've used, they're well matched. :)

One thing I might critique is the sheet you've used as a backdrop. It would've been nice to have that completely flat because, as it is, it draws the attention away from the main focal point of the image and into the top left corner and onto the uneven surface. Also, some post-processing might be nice to make the sheet look a little whiter because the pink muddies the white of the stars. :)

Similarly, some of the shadows are pretty harsh - it might be nice to have a reflector or a second light source on the right hand side of the image to even up the lighting.

The only other thing I might like to see is to see you take the DOF a little further and have only one or two of the stars in focus, I feel it would just make the image ' pop ' a little further!

But it is a really lovely image as it is, and none of these changes are necessary - just some things I might feel would make it even better! :giggle:
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looks good.

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thanX :D

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np. =]

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cute :)

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This looks good, great job!^^

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thanX it was just an idea that I came up with! I was like "....I have candy *light bulb turns on goes and grabs camera!*"

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thank you very much :D

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hey i had those candies too!!!

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nice there not too good though ;P

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