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DMC-TZ2 10/80 second F/3.3 5 mm 200 May 23, 2009, 4:18:48 PM Share
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One thing I might critique is the sheet you've used as a backdrop. It would've been nice to have that completely flat because, as it is, it draws the attention away from the main focal point of the image and into the top left corner and onto the uneven surface. Also, some post-processing might be nice to make the sheet look a little whiter because the pink muddies the white of the stars.
Similarly, some of the shadows are pretty harsh - it might be nice to have a reflector or a second light source on the right hand side of the image to even up the lighting.
The only other thing I might like to see is to see you take the DOF a little further and have only one or two of the stars in focus, I feel it would just make the image ' pop ' a little further!
But it is a really lovely image as it is, and none of these changes are necessary - just some things I might feel would make it even better!
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